Descriptive Writing-Revised

Kimberly Galdamez

Descriptive Writing- Revised

Nov.27.2014

Little Guy

One leg resting on the couch’s arm a little boy with his mother being a troublesome.

He wears a blue and gray stripe long arm shirt, gray khaki pants, black socks and sneakers with gray and red. His blonde hair looks gold when the sun shines on it. He has pink cheeks and red ears as if he has been standing in the cold. His small hands grabbing his mama’s necklace, rubbing it and looking at it wiggles the necklace while mom slowly looks at him with her red cheeks. Mom looks straight at him with a stare with one eyebrow raised. He rapidly brings his foot down to the ground and hugs his brother. He disturbed his brother while he was reading by approaching him and whispering. His brother pushes him away and he turns his attention back to his mom. To get his mom’s attention, he jumps and starts to tap his mom on the shoulder. Mom gives him an intense look emphasizing her feelings by arching her eyebrows. He turns frowning and has teary eyes. Boy begins to hum as he crawls out of the room.

Woman

Her left foot rests on the wall while she smokes a cigarette. She’s passing the time by reading and looking at her phone. She brings her phone closer to her face. Dropping her left foot, she decides to put her right foot on the wall. Inhales another puff from her cigarette. She flips her long black hair, only for it to slowly fall back into her face. Her right hand holding the cigarette gets closer to her mouth, goes to inhale once more. While she’s smoking, her Michael Kors purse slides down her left arm arriving right by her knee. A red shirt peeks through her blue jacket as she is unzipping it.  She drops her foot from the wall and holds her jacket on her left arm. She slips her phone into her navy jeans pocket as she walks towards a crow.

Girl

The girl is sitting on a park chair anxiously. She looks around and constantly taps her fingers on a beige bag with black stars and pink lining the edge of the bag. She wears black leggings and black sneakers which shout “Nike” with pink letters. Her white sweater is slowly slipping from her left shoulder giving the world a glance of her black tank top and bare shoulder. Her blonde hair tied up in a ponytail has a blue bandana wrapped around it. She restlessly plays with her hair which has pink,blue and purple dye on the ends. She gets up, adjusts her sweater and grabs her bag. While pushing her chair away, she says goodbye to some people and walks away loudly with noisy steps.

Pigeon

His nails scraping the concrete floor while picking at the food on the floor. He waddles his head as he walks around, slowly approaching the garden. His black round pupils which are seen through his orange eye sockets seem to be looking around. His orange feet are wondering around the ground to arrive to his next location. His shiny green-blue neck contrasts his gray back and black wings. Lifting his neck, he looks up and slowly turns his head. As if signaling someone, he brings his head down and then back up. He hops onto the stairs and takes off over the crowd. He safely lands on the ground and continues his hunt for food on the ground.