Kimberly C. Galdamez
September. 20. 2014
English
Descriptive Writing
Little Guy
One leg resting on the couch’s arm a little boy with his mother being a troublesome.
Him wearing a blue and gray stripe long arm shirt, gray khaki pants, black socks and sneakers with gray and red. His blonde hair with the light looking gold, his pink cheeks and red ears. His small hands grabbing his mama’s necklace, rubbing it and looking at it wiggles the necklace while mom slowly looks at him with her red cheeks. Mom looks straight at him with a stare, while one eyebrow rises. He rapid bring his foot down to the ground and hugs his brother, disturbing his brother reading he approaches him and whispers. Brother pushes him away, he turns back to his mom. Jumps, and starts to tap his mom on the shoulder trying to grab her attention. Mom gives him and intense look with “ arched- eyebrow” to boy. Boy turns around with teary eyes, he frowns. Boy humming he leaves crawling the room.
Woman
Her left foot lays on the wall, while she smokes a cigarette. Reading and looking at her phone. Brings her phone closer to her face. Drop her left foot and switches to her right foot to lay on the wall. Takes another smoke. Flips her long black hair, slowly falls back on her face. her right hand holding the cigarette gets closer to her mouth, goes for another smoke. While her left arm holds her Michael Kors purse that drops almost near her knee. While she tries to unzip her blue jacket, her red shirt shows. Drops her foot from the wall and holds the jacket on her left arm. Puts her phone away on her navy jeans pocket. Now,She starts to walk away to the crow.
Girl
Sitting on a chair at the park, looking around constantly taps her beige bag with black stars and pink on the edge. Wearing black leggings, all black sneakers and pink letters saying “nike”. White sweater drops on her left arm,her black teen top and shoulder showing. Wearing a blue bandana, her blonde hair on a pony tail. Plays with her hair having pink, blue, and purple on her ends. Gets up. Fixes her sweater and grabs her bag. Pushes the chair away, saying goodbye to some people, her steps get noisy as she walks away.
Pigeon
Nails grabbing onto the floor, picking food of the floor. Waddles head as it walks around close to
the garden. Orange eye socket, black round pupil, shiny green-blueish neck, back all gray, with
black wings and orange feets wondering around the ground. Looks up, lifting his neck, slowly turns
head, brings it down and back up. Jumps stairs, flying over the crowd gets on the street, and
keeps waddling around, picking food of the floor.
